Hey Isabella, I like your pitch, the questions you asked got me thinking and made me become more interested in the product your offering. For the pitch, try to include more specifics on what type of clothing range you would include(basics- would you only include sweaters and pants? or gym clothes as well). This can help target a specific audience depending on what your opportunity is. Overall you did a really great job!
Hi Isabella, I think you did a really good job with your pitch! Your talked clearly and your hand gestures made the pitch seem more natural. However, I felt it was a little short so maybe you could add a little more information about the opportunity and how the specifics of your product will solve the problem. Thank you for sharing!
Hello Isabella! Great elevator pitch! You talked at a great pace and projected your words. Also, the ideas on your previous post were all organized and compact into this 90 second pitch. Overall amazing product and job!
Hey Isabella, I like your pitch, the questions you asked got me thinking and made me become more interested in the product your offering. For the pitch, try to include more specifics on what type of clothing range you would include(basics- would you only include sweaters and pants? or gym clothes as well). This can help target a specific audience depending on what your opportunity is. Overall you did a really great job!
ReplyDeleteHi Isabella, I think you did a really good job with your pitch! Your talked clearly and your hand gestures made the pitch seem more natural. However, I felt it was a little short so maybe you could add a little more information about the opportunity and how the specifics of your product will solve the problem. Thank you for sharing!
ReplyDeleteHello Isabella!
ReplyDeleteGreat elevator pitch! You talked at a great pace and projected your words. Also, the ideas on your previous post were all organized and compact into this 90 second pitch. Overall amazing product and job!